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Monday. 9.4.06 8:31 pm
To anyone who reads my attempts at poems...please leave me some feedback if you have time. Do not be afraid to be honest...I will not take offense...I know they are nothing special....I'm just curious to see if anyone is a fan of them...I have several more that I've written over the years. If enough people find them worth their while...I'll post some more...maybe even write something new. Please let me know...and thanks a lot!!!
2 Comments.


some real sincere comments about your writing!
i read it!

cheers,
sank
» thaitanic on 2006-09-04 09:54:25

Well I just read ur poems... and
ur poems aren't bad.. i..dunno they aren't taht great, but they aren't bad either... but Ido really likr that Broken Image poem, defin my favorite one!!
» CPKviperpheonix on 2006-09-05 09:17:46

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Halfwayhome
And These Melodies Will Soar Over The Sea And Past Your Ears Your Eyes Like Prisms Filter Snapshots Into Pools Of Bloodstained Tears And These Words Are Like A Shot Piercing You Skin Into Your Veins Lifting Your Eyelids Just Enough To Watch Me Slowly Drift Away
Emberghost
So much for reason when you need a reaction Who needs discretion when you've got passion? I retraced the lines, the terrain, and the contour Caught your reflection in a maze of mirrors, well Collecting thoughts with crazed determination I came alive with renewed sense of purpose My fear is that I wouldn't even know you if I saw you And how could I live with myself then? Answers time was to provide Yield only to the white's of your eyes And I am not here to mend goodbyes I've come to name the whites of your eyes
Red Jumpsuit Apparatus
But wait, now that I've found you, situations from dark now change to gray Disregarding my absence of memories, it's perpetually blinding me of sanity, and just when I'm giving in, as I try to scale these walls Jericho falls around me and I feel that I've strayed too long And darkness is fading in, and darkness is real Oh my eyes oh closing slowly I try Fate seems to recreate, I just cannot escape, Something holds me down and makes me act a way I can't explain Even now I can feel it coming over me choking me, as I'm falling behind You can say you know me, but you have no clue what my dreams could show you
Taking Back Sunday
This glass house is burning down You light the match, I'll stick around I'll give you everything you want And wish the worst of what I was

"count on having clouded vision for...at least a little while"

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